Added some 1000 words this time around. Didn't realize my writing was of such a low quality. No wonder Twilight-senpai never noticed me.

For an example of how things got changed, here's an old paragraph:

It was a diaper. If she was going to be honest, it might’ve felt a bit damp on the inside, and, of course, Twilight had seen immediately that she’d used it. She’d probably told the hospital staff to put her in one.

And here's the changed version:

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